Tuesday, 22 May 2018

Script

Script:

*Scene opens with D1 walking up to D2 and we see two guys next to D2 talking as he writes something down*
D2:Blue Pendant around her neck you say?
D2:And you met her here at 1PM...
D2:Hmmm... Think we're all done here, thanks.
*D2 turns around and raises his eyebrows to D1*
D2: We're wrapping up now, I'll catch up to you in a sec*
*D1 walks up to a near by building and lights a cigarette and begins smoking*

*Dead of night, detective 1 smoking, hears footsteps and throws cigarette down on the floor crushing it with his foot*
*Detective 2 walks up to him and starts up a conversation*

*Scene opens with Detective reading a note asking him to meet a woman at 8pm by the corner shop*
D1: Evening
D2: Evening
D2:Theres a couple of odd looking fellows we pulled in for questioning tonight, we hope to extract some sort of information from one of them
D1:Odd?
D2:Caught red handed at the crime scene, seemed they were doing a little investigating themselves, they begged and pleaded to be let go, said some woman stitched them up with the job
D1:A woman?
D2:Quite, we don't really know what to believe at the moment anyway, I suppose anything goes as the evidence is at the moment
D1:One can only hope now, if one of them isn't the culprit then we've been well and truly swindled
D2:Indeed *Smokes*
D2:*Gestures the cigarettes as an offering to D1*
D1:*Looks at the floor at the cigarette, camera shows it, looks up and takes one*
D2:Let's hope that luck is on our side before anything else happens
D1: *Puts it against his lips and as he flicks the lighter the camera cuts to the house*

*D1 Walks to the corner shop, looks at the note again and carries on*
D1: *mumbles* I shouldn't be doing this...
*D1 stands around for a while, camera cuts to him looking at his watch then it begins to rain, he leaves to go home*

Inside the house
D1:Honey, I'm home!
Wife:Kitchen!
*D1 hangs his coat up and walks into kitchen*
Wife:Dinners on the table
*D1 approaches the table and sits down*
D1:Mmm, I'm starving
Wife:How's it taste, any good?
*D1 starts eating slowly*
D1:Tastes Nice
*D1 continues eating the food whilst his wife can be seen in the background sharpening her knife*
D1:Blunt knife?
*His wife nods and smiles whilst she continues sharpening the knife*
D1:So, do anything nice today?
*His wife is seen cleaning a knife whilst the basin fills up with red*
Wife:Lovely thank you, I went for a walk
D1:Oh...Where to?
Wife:Oh just down by the forest to gather my thoughts
D1:Oh I see *he pulls out his notepad*
D1:And what time would that be around
Wife:Oh around 1
D1:Mmhmm
Wife:The weather was nice out today so I stayed for a while
D1:Did you happen to meet anyone with you
Wife:No I was by myself the whole time, why?
D1:Did you hear about the murder?
Wife:Murder? Who...
D1:We...Don't know, the body was sevearly dismembered
Wife:Oh well, if she has any family i'm sure something will be revealed about the victim soon?
D1:How did you know it was a woman?
Wife:I just assumed, there has been a lot of female murders recently hasn't there
D1:Unfortunately, we still haven't discovered any corrolation between the murders
D1:

Initial Ideas

Image result for 1920 detective1920's style black and white crime thriller about a the protagonist and his partner getting close to solving the crime when all of a sudden it is discovered that the partner was the murderer all along and he quickly disposes of the protagonist upon this shocking discovery.

The characters will all be wearing 1920's detective outfits, darker colours will be used on the bad guy such as a black suit compared to the lighter suited detectives


Actors-
Detective 1/Husband -
Wife -
Detective 2 -

Opening Scene starts with detective 1 leaving home and saying goodbye to his wife who tells him she will be going out tonight for a walk. Scene cuts to later that night, D1 staring at the ground and smoking, he is waiting for detective 2 to come out of the crime scene and reevaluate the situation, see if any new clues were found detailing the murder. Nothing has been found and so the detective 2 signals this by shaking his head, the corpse is dismembered so they cannot discover who the victim was. They start walking home and D1 returns to his house and discovers that his wife is missing, in their house he discovers another mans coat and concludes that she has been cheating on him with another man. He decides to wait for her to arrive back at home to confront her but she doesn't the whole night. The next morning he sets out to work again despite this anguish he feels, to discover that they found a part of a coat sleeve which is torn, D1 discovers that D2 has a similar coat and then goes home to see the same coat later that night with his initials in it and finding the weapon inside the coat that was used

The detective returns home from a crime scene where a man has been brutally murdered and his corpse has been dismembered, he comes home to his wife who subtly hints to him throughout the night that she is the murderer of the victim from the crime scene and is a cannibal, the audience receives hints throughout the entire film through the use of imagery, colours, character behaviour. Examples of this include her food having a bullet in, her kitchen knife being bloody and she is sharpening it, and the clothes of the man being hung up as he walks in to the house. He first questions her about the coat when he enters but is told that she had a friend around earlier and must of left it. After piecing together the clues he finds out his wife's true identity but before he can stop her he is murdered.